Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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Got this one of my nephew yesterday and thought it looked neat :ok:
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This was my last piece before I took my yearly break. Iknow it's not recent but I need someone to diss me before going back to sfm
(aslo add me back to medie team please i want to be apart of something @Lemon Cuntcake )
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Little too dark imo, I can't fully see what's happening... and the weird laser beams kind of stick out like a sore thumb to the rest of the image.
just realized that.... darn it... for some odd reason. post processing loves to screw with sets and so when i set flashes on the guns barrels the post processing deletes/clips them. i'll have to try and see if there's something i can do to remedy this

EDIT: gmod save broke so thats the poster image im stuck with rip
 
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I don't think that I've shown you this poster, so I am going to post this, if this was actually posted, I'll just delete it and leave this music.

But for the context of this poster, I've made this poster for my Star Wars squad named 'HERMIT', now, I am not the squad lead, but it was once like a flower, and now, it's pretty much only me and a lead, some squad members pop up too, but pretty much rare.​
 
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Pretty busy this week, plus I'm in a kinda bad mood, so going to speedrun this one

@John McRee, surprisingly good posing. I honestly really like how nicely you posed that vort and also framed it, but I'd pump those graphics up a fair bit. Other than that, I'd also add far more content into the picture, but this scenery alone could be alright for a character document, or anything alike. A 7/10 for me

@KillerKat, fabulous picture. They should hire you at Schauma, I bet they could use someone who can capture moving hair like you do. Reduce that jitter in Photoshop or something and you're good to go.
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@Exile, same as above, just without that hair movement part. Also, because setting the right focus can be tricky, you can move your body forward or backwards, helps me a little bit sometimes.
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@fermii socii, a little bit too dark, I'd suggest giving just a bit more lighting on these army duders, but it looks decently posed. I'd have no major issues here, if it weren't for the really bad resolution, that's basically as big as a phone screen. Don't know if it was a crop from a screenshot or something, but try to render your stuff at higher resolution, you're losing big points on it man

@Tera, looks like something you could post on Reddit's r/pics and get someone to buy you a premium for posting it. Definitely something that could be one of Windows' screen savers, mainly because of how beautiful the scenery is. I like it a lot, and it's
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straight off the bat, but pictures like this are just begging for some creative edits in Photoshop like @Elan did some time ago. Good job fam

@Elan, long exposure pictures like this are extra gorgeous if there's more than two lanes present. Best of them are made in those big cities, like New York and stuff. Your picture seems tad boring compared to them, and what I'd suggest would be adding someone standing still, like in that first link I provided. It's still really fucking cool nonetheless, especially your second picture, which looks like some red-hot rod was hanging above the road, but as said before, there should be more stuff there. Either way, a big
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@Omni, Imma just leave a
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and go, you know what's good here, because it's everything

@Captain Cardgage, honestly, if you'd light it up just a little bit more and crop it like this, it'd be perfect, really. You need to learn how to capture only what's important to the scene, otherwise the juicy stuff gets lost in what's not interesting. I give a little hesistant, but I think still deserved
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@Cookie_, I honestly only have a problem with these bullet holes. You see, they're cartoonish and it's really visible on his forehead (which has absolutely no reason to have it's skin so stretched out like that realistically), but on the suit it looks okay. I'd change the one on his face to a simple, Photoshoped bullethole and would also add a little bit of yellow lighting somewhere, maybe from a monitor or something, it'd fit well with the earpieces of cops. You could also add a bit of small volumetrics from these windows, but that's optional. It's a solid 9/10 otherwise though, so
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@Cavity, neat

@Neythi, been a while since I've seen something that legit looks like a screenshot from a game, but I like this one a lot. It's creepy, well lit, and generally good in everything. Ye, I give it a solid pass,
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Hooray, here are your winners:

@Cavity as the big guy


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Just generally good picture, and while not amazingly original, it still grabs attention for it's quality

And @Antloin, as a honorary

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While rendering and lighting sucks a big dong, I had to give a honorary for this posing. Outstanding work fam
 
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After years of training, hours and hours of work, here is my final work, probably the work of my life: Big Brodolf

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