In Progress some shit posing and draw box

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MaXenzie

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You can do better.

AND HERE'S HOW.

Zoom in. A lot. Or just move the camera closer. I can tell you're going for an "empty" piece, but it's too empty.
Add a low-light high-FOV light pointing down at the ground so it isn't completely black, that gives some depth.
Move the volumetric lights out of shot, and adjust their radius so they're less spotlight-ish.

General tips:
Move the camera close first, adjust the FOV second. If you try putting the camera really far and have a tight FOV, your DoF will be fucked.
Nothing should ever be pure black, it removes depth. Same for pure white. Add several weak lights with a high FOV and tint to fix that.
Volumetrics look fake a lot. Give them a slight colour so they look like natural lights, and move them more out of shot, especially their origin point.