Kerim's poses and stuff

[Kerim]

Figured I might as well post my shitty little poses that I do from time to time here. sorted from oldest to newest.

One of the few reasons I made this thread is feedback - so be as honest and critic with me as you can, please.

 

[liew]

I like the 2nd one, however, try not to overuse effects like Sdof and dof.

 

[Inspector Bandito]

you need to decorate and fill in more, my friend; however you shouldn't over-the-top decorate.
aLSO THE ZOOM EFFEC TLIKE WOW

 

[Kerim]

aLSO THE ZOOM EFFEC TLIKE WOW

Could you elaborate a tad more?

 

[liew]

Could you elaborate a tad more?

using the camera hold rmb and use scroll wheel to zoom in

 

[MaXenzie]

You're overusing the border blur.

 

[Bandit]

Rag Mover + Stand Pose tool = Talent

 

[Cookie_]

Let me give you some quick tips.

-Don't use that much blur. it looks odd and it messes the picture up.

-Always, in every picture, use lights to simulate anything.

-Make sure to use HDR models.

-Fill the empty space with anything that fits the scene.

-Try working on the camera angle.

 

[Kerim]

Worked with the tips above, I still have no clue what I am doing, but I think I am starting to get the hang of it.

 

[liew]

Worked with the tips above, I still have no clue what I am doing, but I think I am starting to get the hang of it.

Yeah, this is actually really nice with good lighting. I'd recommend going on google images and seeing how someone would hold a gun though, and try to copy that out just to get it as accurate as possible.

 

[Cookie_]

Worked with the tips above, I still have no clue what I am doing, but I think I am starting to get the hang of it.

ass ass