Shitty Art

[Sadn3zz]

Here's some of my "pictures": (From Bad to Good, in my view)

 

[Sil]

just a bit of constructive criticism here

the focus on a good few of them is odd, focusing on something like the background when the foreground clearly is meant to be the subject of the picture
also in some of them, you use either far too much light or far too little. brightness bleaches out colour, and darkness makes it hard to see a defined subject.
finally, please stop with the dutch angles. they just make the images look really odd.

 

[Sadn3zz]

just a bit of constructive criticism here

the focus on a good few of them is odd, focusing on something like the background when the foreground clearly is meant to be the subject of the picture
also in some of them, you use either far too much light or far too little. brightness bleaches out colour, and darkness makes it hard to see a defined subject.
finally, please stop with the dutch angles. they just make the images look really odd.

Very well, I will try to "improve" my future images / arts, using what you just told me.
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[Sil]

Very well, I will try to "improve" my future images / arts, using what you just told me.
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you make it sound like you're dissatisfied/annoyed with my constructive criticism.

 

[Sadn3zz]

you make it sound like you're dissatisfied/annoyed with my constructive criticism.

K, how so? You expected me to make a gigantic and unnecessary comment saying that " I thank you for giving me the privilege of reading your constructive criticism"?

 

[Sil]

K, how so? You expected me to make a gigantic and unnecessary comment saying that " I thank you for giving me the privilege of reading your constructive criticism"?

i expected a 'thanks, i'll improve next time'.

 

[Sadn3zz]

i expected a 'thanks, i'll improve next time'.

That's what i "KINDA" did.

 

[Sil]

That's what i "KINDA" did back.

using the "quotation marks" makes it sound like you don't actually mean that.

 

[Sadn3zz]

using the "quotation marks" makes it sound like you don't actually mean that.

Okay, what's your point on doing this.

 

[Sil]

Okay, what's your point on doing this.

that you should be genuinely grateful when people try to help you improve, instead of trying to play it off as you acting as if you're on a high horse and that you don't need my criticism and advise.

you can be nice and simple by saying 'thanks for the criticism, i'll try to improve next time' or you can try to make it seem like you're on a high horse of some form by saying "Very well, I will try to "improve" my future images / arts, using what you just told me.". You can easily just not use the quotation marks.

 

[Sadn3zz]

that you should be genuinely grateful when people try to help you improve, instead of trying to play it off as you acting as if you're on a high horse and that you don't need my criticism and advise.

you can be nice and simple by saying 'thanks for the criticism, i'll try to improve next time' or you can try to make it seem like you're on a high horse of some form by saying "Very well, I will try to "improve" my future images / arts, using what you just told me.". You can easily just not use the quotation marks.

That's it? You wasted time, energy, just because of a random member of the forums that did not gave you the well deserved thanks that you think you deserve,because of a constructive criticism?
I've heard of great exaggerations, but this, this one is next level.
And tbh i think your constructive criticism is well made and written.

 

[Sil]

That's it? You wasted time, energy, just because of a random member of the forums that did not gave you the well deserved thanks that you think you deserve,because of a constructive criticism?
I've heard of great exaggerations, but this, this one is next level.
And tbh i think your constructive criticism is well made and written.

ok i could've insulted your pictures, called them shit and intentionally pick them apart because i don't like them and i'm fairly certain you've taken 'inspiration' from my work, but no i wanted to try and help you make better pictures.

and then you act like a high-and-mighty, entitled prick as if you're better than the criticism and above the help of others despite you posting on a public platform.

want me to pick out the pictures i'm fairly certain you've had 'inspiration' from off of me? here we go.

Here's some of my "pictures": (From Bad to Good, in my view)

now my work

i realise it may be petty to do this, but at this point if someone is gonna act high and mighty over criticism on a public platform it doesn't reeeally matter.

So you see these pieces i've done? compare them to the ones done up there. fairly similar in the subject.
top picture is a guy looking at a hunter in the distance in an 'over-the-shoulder' view. now the difference is, from that image i learnt that dutch angles and putting the subject in the distance was a bad idea. you haven't, from what it shows.

now the second image. probably my most accomplished and best piece. i know you used the exact same map, in a very similar manner to my picture. a guy walking down the hallway, a light shining on him, facing away from the camera. comparing them both, you can see the similarities of both images fairly well.

i don't personally care for people making things that're inspired from others. hell, i wanted to make a set based on those tarot cards way back a good while ago. but if you take inspiration from them in their image, then you should take inspiration from their tips too.
i only did the criticism to try and help a fellow gmod artiste, but instead you decide to stay high and mighty, acting as if my effort to try and help you was useless and a waste.

fuck you. don't take inspiration from my pictures, and don't take my advice.

 

[Sil]

also i noticed this in my art thread which i thought was quite funny.

Thank you but, art is not to be created by the thoughts of others but by your thoughts

yet you create art out of my own, personal thoughts.

 

[Sadn3zz]

1- I wasn't trying to act has a "high-and-mighty" scrub,but it seems to your eyes (and to others that are watching this completely unnecessary fight), I acted as one.
2- You may not believe it, but I never took inspiration from anyone's "arts", even though the "arts" are similar, I think they're a coincidence.
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also i noticed this in my art thread which i thought was quite funny.


yet you create art out of my own, personal thoughts.

This is the kind of shit that i used to say when my name was "GamerTag_", and i would like to ignore it, and i hope i can keep it that way

4- We clearly misunderstood each other.

5- I take full responsibility for doing this unnecessary shit, and yes, i should have said "Thanks for giving me your advice, i will try to do better next time", to you, but unfortunately the messages that i sended were misunderstood.

 

[Sil]

thank you for correcting yourself.

 

[Sadn3zz]

thank you for correcting yourself.

Thanks for understanding the mistakes.