Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

[Man wearing a helmet]

Nah nah nah, i mean the Cracha Preto and Favela gang members
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yeah ik man those i linked are still pretty cool

Max Payne 3 = Not the best third person shooter

eat shit and die

 

[Piggo]

Max Payne 3 = Not the best third person shooter

Honestly die
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yeah ik man those i linked are still pretty cool



eat shit and die

yeah they're also incredibly useful for non sexual female models

just wish we had those cunt mercs :((((

 

[CloudBucket]

Crazy Knife makes some pretty good model packs :ok:

 

[lemon]

Fucking hell, it's 137th already

@Piggo, love your artworks man, but I think I'll just keep you out of this one, especially that this one would just smash everything else into pieces. Really dig that lighting there,

overall tho

@Dicknose, now that's an interesting poster. If I were to sup it up in one word, it'd probably be "colorful". The two dominant colors here (orange and blue, if you can't spot it) are super saturated, which makes it all feel really juicy. I also love how you tilted the camera a little, so that the viewer has a little feel of movement. Generally speaking, it's just perfect, but there's always something that doesn't quite works out. That thing is how empty the background is. If you'd spend an extra of, let's say, two hours, filling the background with a scene of either some goons surrounding Boba, and instantly regretting that, that'd make it so much better. I honestly think this is the only big issue here, so I won't yabber anymore here, as it'd be useless. Good work, keep it up, proud of you,

@CloudBucket, in the opposition to what was posted above, this poster is very badly lit, with minimal lighting, which make it really dull. There are barely any colors, and everything just melds down to a red'ish brown. Also, I don't really get what this scene in particual has to do with the title. I can see that girl in the background doing a blowjob, but that's about it, she's the background, while we have a thinking male in the front. What I mean, is that this title suggests that the main character here, that is this black male in the front, is a prostitute. I lack of context here, but I guess everything else is fine. Posing isn't too complex, but does the work, same goes for the font you used in your title, it's actually a really good one. Not much to it other than that though I guess, unless it's like the first page of a comic that I haven't read. Idk, I just don't see no story here, sorry

@MaXenzie, a very typical pose for your style: an oversaturated, contrasting poster with over-the-top editing and binary colors. Nice, I like it,

@Dinguss, it's an obvious screenshot, there's no hiding that, but it does look alright. I think that you could've gone with other kind of color palette for this one, probably using a filter with some cold colors, as this white sand takes too much of attention, because of how bright it is. It's also a shame, that this screenshot was took when nothing was really happening on these tracks, or behind the fence on the other side. It's alright for a quick screenshot though, just wouldn't use it as a wallpaper

@goose, just gonna

, you know why. Love it though, every aspect of it

Two of the old guys even got here

@Lokinase and @Elan take the first places

And @Erkor with @Neythi take the honoraries

​

 

[Deleted member 1392]

Fucking hell, it's 137th already


@Piggo, love your artworks man, but I think I'll just keep you out of this one, especially that this one would just smash everything else into pieces. Really dig that lighting there,

overall tho


@Dicknose, now that's an interesting poster. If I were to sup it up in one word, it'd probably be "colorful". The two dominant colors here (orange and blue, if you can't spot it) are super saturated, which makes it all feel really juicy. I also love how you tilted the camera a little, so that the viewer has a little feel of movement. Generally speaking, it's just perfect, but there's always something that doesn't quite works out. That thing is how empty the background is. If you'd spend an extra of, let's say, two hours, filling the background with a scene of either some goons surrounding Boba, and instantly regretting that, that'd make it so much better. I honestly think this is the only big issue here, so I won't yabber anymore here, as it'd be useless. Good work, keep it up, proud of you,

@CloudBucket, in the opposition to what was posted above, this poster is very badly lit, with minimal lighting, which make it really dull. There are barely any colors, and everything just melds down to a red'ish brown. Also, I don't really get what this scene in particual has to do with the title. I can see that girl in the background doing a blowjob, but that's about it, she's the background, while we have a thinking male in the front. What I mean, is that this title suggests that the main character here, that is this black male in the front, is a prostitute. I lack of context here, but I guess everything else is fine. Posing isn't too complex, but does the work, same goes for the font you used in your title, it's actually a really good one. Not much to it other than that though I guess, unless it's like the first page of a comic that I haven't read. Idk, I just don't see no story here, sorry


@MaXenzie, a very typical pose for your style: an oversaturated, contrasting poster with over-the-top editing and binary colors. Nice, I like it,

@Dinguss, it's an obvious screenshot, there's no hiding that, but it does look alright. I think that you could've gone with other kind of color palette for this one, probably using a filter with some cold colors, as this white sand takes too much of attention, because of how bright it is. It's also a shame, that this screenshot was took when nothing was really happening on these tracks, or behind the fence on the other side. It's alright for a quick screenshot though, just wouldn't use it as a wallpaper


@goose, just gonna

, you know why. Love it though, every aspect of it

Two of the old guys even got here

@Lokinase and @Elan take the first places

And @Erkor with @Neythi take the honoraries

​

i guess im just not going to post stuff here anymore, i just post trash so *shrugs*

 

[lemon]

i guess im just not going to post stuff here anymore, i just post trash so *shrugs*

I posted this trash some time ago:

Yet I'm still here, and I'm actually the judge. You just need to keep on trying, and you'll eventually get there. Trust me, constantly doing bad shit, gets you to the point where you only do the good shits

 

[Dicknose]

@Dicknose, now that's an interesting poster. If I were to sup it up in one word, it'd probably be "colorful". The two dominant colors here (orange and blue, if you can't spot it) are super saturated, which makes it all feel really juicy. I also love how you tilted the camera a little, so that the viewer has a little feel of movement. Generally speaking, it's just perfect, but there's always something that doesn't quite works out. That thing is how empty the background is. If you'd spend an extra of, let's say, two hours, filling the background with a scene of either some goons surrounding Boba, and instantly regretting that, that'd make it so much better. I honestly think this is the only big issue here, so I won't yabber anymore here, as it'd be useless. Good work, keep it up, proud of you,

I'll fill them in and update it for next week alongside my next submission-

 

[Lokinase]

that makes two for two for me, doesn't it
stroke my ego harder daddy

 

[CloudBucket]

Fucking hell, it's 137th already


@Piggo, love your artworks man, but I think I'll just keep you out of this one, especially that this one would just smash everything else into pieces. Really dig that lighting there,

overall tho


@Dicknose, now that's an interesting poster. If I were to sup it up in one word, it'd probably be "colorful". The two dominant colors here (orange and blue, if you can't spot it) are super saturated, which makes it all feel really juicy. I also love how you tilted the camera a little, so that the viewer has a little feel of movement. Generally speaking, it's just perfect, but there's always something that doesn't quite works out. That thing is how empty the background is. If you'd spend an extra of, let's say, two hours, filling the background with a scene of either some goons surrounding Boba, and instantly regretting that, that'd make it so much better. I honestly think this is the only big issue here, so I won't yabber anymore here, as it'd be useless. Good work, keep it up, proud of you,

@CloudBucket, in the opposition to what was posted above, this poster is very badly lit, with minimal lighting, which make it really dull. There are barely any colors, and everything just melds down to a red'ish brown. Also, I don't really get what this scene in particual has to do with the title. I can see that girl in the background doing a blowjob, but that's about it, she's the background, while we have a thinking male in the front. What I mean, is that this title suggests that the main character here, that is this black male in the front, is a prostitute. I lack of context here, but I guess everything else is fine. Posing isn't too complex, but does the work, same goes for the font you used in your title, it's actually a really good one. Not much to it other than that though I guess, unless it's like the first page of a comic that I haven't read. Idk, I just don't see no story here, sorry


@MaXenzie, a very typical pose for your style: an oversaturated, contrasting poster with over-the-top editing and binary colors. Nice, I like it,

@Dinguss, it's an obvious screenshot, there's no hiding that, but it does look alright. I think that you could've gone with other kind of color palette for this one, probably using a filter with some cold colors, as this white sand takes too much of attention, because of how bright it is. It's also a shame, that this screenshot was took when nothing was really happening on these tracks, or behind the fence on the other side. It's alright for a quick screenshot though, just wouldn't use it as a wallpaper


@goose, just gonna

, you know why. Love it though, every aspect of it

Two of the old guys even got here

@Lokinase and @Elan take the first places

And @Erkor with @Neythi take the honoraries

​

I changed my entry lemon :( dont do that one

 

[CloudBucket]

I posted this trash some time ago:


Yet I'm still here, and I'm actually the judge. You just need to keep on trying, and you'll eventually get there. Trust me, constantly doing bad shit, gets you to the point where you only do the good shits

show us sum of ur art master cuntcake

 

[Piggo]

just go on his steam profile

 

[MaXenzie]

i guess im just not going to post stuff here anymore, i just post trash so *shrugs*

dont you fucking dare

@media devs post your early work to motivate this boy

NOW U MIGHT BE THINKIN

wow these are shit i bet he put these in the trash

nope i posted almost all of these in art of the week and @Lemon Cuntcake can confirm i was shit

just because you didnt strike gold this time doesnt mean you never will. once you hit that point, you only get better

 

[Deleted member 1392]

dont you fucking dare

@media devs post your early work to motivate this boy

NOW U MIGHT BE THINKIN

wow these are shit i bet he put these in the trash

nope i posted almost all of these in art of the week and @Lemon Cuntcake can confirm i was shit

just because you didnt strike gold this time doesnt mean you never will. once you hit that point, you only get better

ow ok, imma mail you some kebab as a thanks

 

[Piggo]

The biggest tip I can give is spend more time on artworks you make

Other tips are:
1. Don't use in-game editing like SDOF or filters, not only will it help with your photoshop/gimp skills they also usually look like shit
2. Use the poster command in console (poster 2/3/4/5 whatever number you like) instead of the camera tool screenshot because its saves quality, you need to convert to jpeg as well to not kill everyones internet. I wouldn't reccomend this if you're super shit because it'll probably confuse you
no offence
3. Pick up SFM! Not only does it have many benefits gmod doesn't have its also pretty easy to learn and doesn't have to replace Gmod, I use both but mostly SFM nowadays.
however it is also fucking infested with porn, Sonic, FNAF and TF2 cunts with their stupid OCs and fetish art so take your pick.
4. Don't just search workshop for models, search around on garrysmod.org and Facepunch. I've got about 300gb of various shit so if you ever want a certain model but can't seem to find it, feel free to message me here or on steam i really don't mind.
5. Look at other pictures. Look at them. Look back at your lighting. Is there anything you're doing obviously wrong?
6. Try to scenebuild and light scenes without using a map and only using props. If you do this DON'T DO IT ON FUCKING FLATGRASS, USE GM_BLACK_V3
7. Look up reference poses online, try not to use stock photos, most of the time they're wrong and stupid.
8. Your mom gay
[doublepost=1525188414][/doublepost]Like heres the problems i can see with these two:

Whats meant to be going on?
What actually went into this?

To me all it seems is some ragdoll posing on a map and just took a screenshot bam, no details added.
Whilst I am horribly biased against HL2 pictures, i feel this is a big problem with many HL2 pics posted here and screenshots in general. They're not doing anything, they're boring and not visually interesting.
Danny and Goose's art is a great example of what you can do even when not much is in the picture, you don't need massive scenebuilds and lots of ragdolls to make a great scene.
The easiest solution is to put more into the picture most of the time, or find a better angle.. For example @Dinguss your picture would benefit massivly from lots of ragdolls posed on the other side to give a contrast between the empty platform with her on it to that one.

 

[lemon]

@Lemon Cuntcake can confirm i was shit

You still are, but yeah, you were pretty bad

 

[Dicknose]

The biggest tip I can give is spend more time on artworks you make

Other tips are:
1. Don't use in-game editing like SDOF or filters, not only will it help with your photoshop/gimp skills they also usually look like shit
2. Use the poster command in console (poster 2/3/4/5 whatever number you like) instead of the camera tool screenshot because its saves quality, you need to convert to jpeg as well to not kill everyones internet. I wouldn't reccomend this if you're super shit because it'll probably confuse you
no offence
3. Pick up SFM! Not only does it have many benefits gmod doesn't have its also pretty easy to learn and doesn't have to replace Gmod, I use both but mostly SFM nowadays.
however it is also fucking infested with porn, Sonic, FNAF and TF2 cunts with their stupid OCs and fetish art so take your pick.
4. Don't just search workshop for models, search around on garrysmod.org and Facepunch. I've got about 300gb of various shit so if you ever want a certain model but can't seem to find it, feel free to message me here or on steam i really don't mind.
5. Look at other pictures. Look at them. Look back at your lighting. Is there anything you're doing obviously wrong?
6. Try to scenebuild and light scenes without using a map and only using props. If you do this DON'T DO IT ON FUCKING FLATGRASS, USE GM_BLACK_V3
7. Look up reference poses online, try not to use stock photos, most of the time they're wrong and stupid.
8. Your mom gay
[doublepost=1525188414][/doublepost]Like heres the problems i can see with these two:

Whats meant to be going on?
What actually went into this?

To me all it seems is some ragdoll posing on a map and just took a screenshot bam, no details added.
Whilst I am horribly biased against HL2 pictures, i feel this is a big problem with many HL2 pics posted here and screenshots in general. They're not doing anything, they're boring and not visually interesting.
Danny and Goose's art is a great example of what you can do even when not much is in the picture, you don't need massive scenebuilds and lots of ragdolls to make a great scene.
The easiest solution is to put more into the picture most of the time, or find a better angle.. For example @Dinguss your picture would benefit massivly from lots of ragdolls posed on the other side to give a contrast between the empty platform with her on it to that one.

I'm not listening to you

 

[Danny]

that makes two for two for me, doesn't it
stroke my ego harder daddy

Count your blessings, you’ll be banned from winning like the rest of us top tiers soon enough.

 

[ddæ]

Max Payne 3 = Not the best third person shooter

bet you like battlefield 1 you cretin

 

[Piggo]

4 is the best Battlefield with 2 and 3 sharing second place fight me

 

[MaXenzie]

4 is the best Battlefield with 2 and 3 sharing second place fight me

i dont hit the disabled

oof