Artsy review of the two weeks
@Dicknose, atmospheric, but not much more than that. Nothing really is happening here, although I get where you got the inspiration from so it kinda excuses you a bit. I'd however modify it a little bit either way, add a shadow of one person shooting other, or anything else that's fun and joyful. Also, get rid of these filthy purple borders. It's all perfect otherwise tho,
@Piggo, just get your
and get out
@Danny, going to let my girl do this one, as she's far more into photography than me. She said something like this:
Nice place, but not so interesting photo by itself. Doesn't show much stuff apart from a nice cliff, which makes it a tad boring. It's mostly because of the perspective, instead of being horizontal, which would widen the picture a far bit and get rid of the empty space above what's shown. It has it's style, and sky is nice, don't get me wrong, but it looks like you're trying to make the viewer focus on the cliff, rather than the big blue above.
I still like it a lot myself though, photography like
this really makes you see some wonderful places. You also have your own style, which would look really good as wallpapers on phones. Also, this guy seems to be waving to us, so that's a big plus
I give
for nice views
@Viper0419, as one genius once said, military poses are getting a little bit stale, but I have to admit that this one looks like it took a little bit of your time. It has some very fluid, alive posing, where each character does something themselves, or interacts with others. The only issues I see here would be that unnatural light and very low render quality. If I were you, I'd put the light way up in the sky, and change it to something yellow-and-red-'ish, to give it dawn vibe. Also, one light isn't enough, sometimes you need to light one person more than the other, so don't be afraid to use many lights in one pose, just make it
seem like it's one light. How to fix the second one is pretty obvious, just pump these rendering settings up, I personally render in 3840x2160, but it's also important to take care of ambient occlusion and stuff alike. Otherwise, it's goodie, I like
@Mateozz,
I think this could look even better if you rotated moved the camera to the left so that the line of CPs forms a diagonal on the screen's corners, would give a better sense of motion and depth imo.
Gotta agree with this edited quote, but I also have to congratulate for a very nice camera angle and color choice. That red in the background goes perfectly with white-blue. Widening the screen would add a hell lot, as that quote said, but I would also highly fucking recommend you to use HD models for my and other viewers' sake, either
this, or
this. Giving this one a
tho, amazing progress you did there
@>MJ, no idea how to do these, so won't judge, but I did enjoy the funnies, so
Biggie of this round is @Cavity, but please, choose one next time
Really neato posing, lighting and pretty much everything