In Progress [Competition] Art of The Week

Discussion in 'Creative' started by Lemon Cuntcake, Apr 26, 2016.

  1. Antloin

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    I don't mind my other artwork to be judged next time, I just wanted to share it out and hear the opinions.
     
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  2. Corey

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    The one above is the submission.

    My previous post was pretty shit, didn't take much effort or time
     
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  3. Piggo

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    tf2 one, my bad
     
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  4. Dicknose

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    hey guys so it's sad n word hours for me so I'm putting that halo reach pose off
     
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  5. Neythi

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    it's ok friend, you still have 1 week after Lemon does this week to finish it
     
  6. Neythi

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    Hey, just a heads up, your image doesn't show up anymore for some reason.
     
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  7. Corey

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    I can see it, can anyone else see it?
     
  8. Isuckatgaming

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    Yeah I can still see it
     
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  9. Neythi

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    Updated version and submission :

    [​IMG]
     
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  10. Lemon Cuntcake

    Lemon Cuntcake Sells cheap beer
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    If that's okay with you, I'll give you all my review tomorrow, I'm a little bit more busy than usual today
     
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  11. Lemon Cuntcake

    Lemon Cuntcake Sells cheap beer
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    NO WINNER THIS TIME
    BECAUSE I'M A CUNT
    WHO CAN'T DECIDE

    @Mateozz, pretty simplistic pose, even for a portrait. The concept here is pretty straightforward and easy to understand, as long as you know what game it's from, but me being the lucky guy who actually had a chance to play MGS V, I see no problem with understanding this poster (although the few that didn't play it would be probably pretty confused here). Lighting on both of his sides, representing good and bad, conflicted emotions shown on face, could've also added someone dead in the right corner for cheesy emotional poster points. I can only bitch about posing here, which is only bad on his shoulders, they just look unnaturally pulled down. Overall a solid 7/10

    @Sixx, same as before, not too fancy for me, but not too shabby at all as well

    @Piggo, you always make the best of posters, especially in terms of lighting and posing. Nothing out of the ordinary here, I'd honestly see these very pictures in some sort of a TF2 comic strip. [​IMG]

    @Dicknose, I can only beg for more content in this scene, everything else is alright. Add more passangers, some cool stuff they could be passing by and maybe a few volumetric lights and that's all. Goodie

    @Antloin, although too heavily saturated, this poster has some class. Very well framed, it shows a pretty decently thought out idea, while keeping a nice and thick atmosphere. Me likey a lot, although instead of increasing saturation and contrast the fuck out, I'd rather mess around with other post-processing effects, and Photoshop has many to experiment with. Also, buildings in the far background seem to be lit, while everything else seems to be set at night. Unless that's some artsy design that I just don't get, it's a pretty big problem here. Cool otherwise though, I'd definitely use it as a poster for an event if it'd be corrected

    @Corey, very simple and quick poster, but I gotta commend your posing, it's quite solid for a beginner. Anything else than that falls flat though, lighting is very dim, the camera angle puts the window as about 30% of what you're seeing, you can't really see what he's looking at, or anything remotely interesting behind it for that matter. Honestly, if you're going for a picture in a style like this, here's an old picture made by @Danny, it should give you a decent idea of how to do a poster like this one. Volumetric lightning can add a hell lot to your poster, especially in one where window plays one of the main roles there. However, don't give it too much attention, it should be the most important thing about the background, instead of being one of the more important things in the foreground. Block the view out of it with some plank barricades (lighting looks cool as fuck then), or something outside of it, like another housing block, or actually show something interesting there, like a Strider striding through the street, looking towards the window with our protagonist behind it. Also, adding stuff lying around, stuff that'd give you a clear indication that this guy isn't exactly your typical citizen, would help greatly here. It's a cool idea, definitely not the one that's as popular as I'd like it to be, but not so easy to pull off. I hardly recommend you to try it again fam, I'd love to see you actually do it properly

    @Neythi, pretty weird poster, but I actually like it. It has a little feel of dread to it. So, it's all great actually, I see no major issues, but rather three little ones. Uno, posing on that revenant is a little bit weird. On one side, it looks as if it'd just finished off that guy on the ground, and now it's just standing, waiting for a next move from the two knights in front of it. On the other side, it looks as if it'd be striding forward, but in an odd and somehow funny fashion. Just a bit too weird here. Dos, it feels a little bit empty. I know that there's fog and bunch of dead bodies lying around, but somehow that background with dead trees and that free space in the centre still feels empty. I'd maybe add some other monsters fighting other knights, you know, to make it look like something is actually happening out there besides just this scene. Tres, a little bit of post-process polishing wouldn't hurt a bit, it'd help a great amount actually. Messing around with adding even more fog and blood would give this pose a far darker atmosphere. Also, when we're at it, this particular picture could actually be a tad darker. You could've removed that light that highlights the monster from the front, add one, soft blue light from above and darken the scene via rendering options a lot. That all would make this okay picture into a great wallpaper that I'd love to see even on my screen. Try it out fam
     
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  12. Bobby Denton

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    Part of my ongoing project in school, small self portrait
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  13. Piggo

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    A HOPE FOR TOMORROW

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  15. John McRee

    John McRee Gmod & Paint.NET Artiste

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    buff boi
     
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  16. 247-0006-0001 'Jimbo'

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    [​IMG]

    Been awhile since I've gotten involved in the Artwork Contest, but, recently designed a bunch of Recruitment posters for a custom FalloutRP faction, so, thought I'd share them.
    #NCR=NewCommunistRegime
     
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  17. ramsgater

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    @Dingo ahahahahah
     
  18. egg

    egg Diagnosed Autist
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    Looks like Retropirate never quits. I don't know what fallout server it is but i'm willing to bet Pilot leads the legion.
     
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  19. 247-0006-0001 'Jimbo'

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    Its true, he never does - and Pilots not involved in this one - some DarkRP type server thing. I do love the LPs theme though.
    PM if you fancy chatting - dont want to clog thread.
     
  20. John McRee

    John McRee Gmod & Paint.NET Artiste

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    Hollup Fallout Server real?

    I might PM you about Legion.
     
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