Bacon's shite posing

[Chris .P. Bacon]

got em biger

 

[NightVeil]

Its not that bad, I mean its definitely better than any attempt i could make.

Maybe in the future you could try so lighting work, i think it would help quite a lot.

 

[Chris .P. Bacon]

Yeah, This is my first attempt of posing, I used lamps so peoples faces could be seen

Also how do you make the picture big when posting them?

 

[MaXenzie]

Yeah, This is my first attempt of posing, I used lamps so peoples faces could be seen

Also how do you make the picture big when posting them?

f12 for screenshot, upload screenshot, copy image URL normally works.

Make sure graphics and resolution are maxed.

 

[Cookie_]

Well...

Let's get honest here. The work ain't impresive..imo. Sry don't kill me if I hurt ur feelings.
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You should think more about the concept of your artwork, such as shotcop or CP sweep, maybe some other stuff.

Next think you need is to work with camera angle, so you capture everything needed in your shot and remove the useless stuff. Also ue zoom in 'hold rmb and move it).

Lightings... Lighting adds immersion to anything. You make some cool decent light that creates shadows, bam and it's better.

These is a small rule of every picture. Less empty space, better art.

 

[MaXenzie]

Well...

Let's get honest here. The work ain't impresive..imo. Sry don't kill me if I hurt ur feelings.
¨
You should think more about the concept of your artwork, such as shotcop or CP sweep, maybe some other stuff.

Next think you need is to work with camera angle, so you capture everything needed in your shot and remove the useless stuff. Also ue zoom in 'hold rmb and move it).

Lightings... Lighting adds immersion to anything. You make some cool decent light that creates shadows, bam and it's better.

These is a small rule of every picture. Less empty space, better art.

The worst thing you can say is that someone's art isn't good.

It's literally his first attempt and you're already railing him like he was in an art competition, this isn't Whiplash.

Good artwork doesn't require a concept, especially when you're still learning how to crawl, let alone walk with posing tools.

His camera angles aren't anything to complain about when he's spaced the characters out and doesn't know how to properly use it.

And lighting is cancer in gmod. I can see why he hasn't used it, you need @georgeebizzle to walk you through it before you can get good lighting on a poster when you still don't know how to pose. Let him learn the easy shit before he dives into the deep end.

Also, that small golden rule can piss off. Some of the best artwork has been art that relies on empty space to tell a story, wastelands, isolation, vastness, all shown by giving the viewer just one subject to focus on, with everything else there to make it stand out.

Like holy shit the poses aren't even that bad for a first try.

 

[Chris .P. Bacon]

Its fine, i'm always open to feedback BUT I do know that I need to concentrate on lighting, empty space etc. Just my first attempt at posing

 

[Chris .P. Bacon]

Some more which I did yesterday

To much empty spacing, lighting is not good

empty space again

 

[Rengar]

Keep up the good work! I really liked those.

 

[Cookie_]

The worst thing you can say is that someone's art isn't good.

It's literally his first attempt and you're already railing him like he was in an art competition, this isn't Whiplash.

Good artwork doesn't require a concept, especially when you're still learning how to crawl, let alone walk with posing tools.

His camera angles aren't anything to complain about when he's spaced the characters out and doesn't know how to properly use it.

And lighting is cancer in gmod. I can see why he hasn't used it, you need @georgeebizzle to walk you through it before you can get good lighting on a poster when you still don't know how to pose. Let him learn the easy shit before he dives into the deep end.

Also, that small golden rule can piss off. Some of the best artwork has been art that relies on empty space to tell a story, wastelands, isolation, vastness, all shown by giving the viewer just one subject to focus on, with everything else ghere to make it stand out.

Like holy shit the poses aren't even that bad for a first try.

Ik gmod lighting is cancer but.- Oh wait I go full Gmod master rac..Okay whatever.

 

[Chris .P. Bacon]

Testing with SDoF

 

[Chris .P. Bacon]

 

[Deleted member 342]

ya getting better but try to zoom in a lot more when you are doing portraits, have the main subject the largest thing on the screen

 

[MaXenzie]

Were you trying to get the gun over her shoulder?

Her arm may be broken.

Good camera angle tho.

 

[Chris .P. Bacon]

No, I was just making her raise it

and the arm is fucked xD

 

[Chris .P. Bacon]

Feedback? And Yes I know I didn't use any depth of field or much lighting

 

[Deleted member 342]

try these bad boys out
https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=114502372
there are some even more updated ones of these but these are my fav

 

[MaXenzie]

try these bad boys out
https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=114502372
there are some even more updated ones of these but these are my fav

You fucking fool there's a v4 now.

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=677125227&searchtext=

 

[Deleted member 342]

You fucking fool there's a v4 now.

https://steamcommunity.com/sharedfiles/filedetails/?id=677125227&searchtext=

there are some even more updated ones of these but these are my fav

;)


also try to use a bit more eye posing, to start aswell when you using maps like that come with lights dont worry to much about using your lamps, just try to improve on your posing in general and camera work, they the most important

your getting better tho

 

[Chris .P. Bacon]

How do you muzzle flash?