Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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Effects are fan fucking tastic with the lens flar.

Muzzle flash is a bit dull, make it a bright orange with glow.

The posing is also a bit stiff.


PLACEHOLDER ART:
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Okay here's my current entry:
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heres something that I worked on for about 10 minutes and just said fuck it. Going to submit something more worthwhile next week.

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heres something that I worked on for about 10 minutes and just said fuck it. Going to submit something more worthwhile next week.

96F5B6EB3D9BBC06BCE5EE0CD5BE81A5EB2F56BD
That blood seems a little bit out of space, and some blood stains on the sword would've made this picture great.
 

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heres something that I worked on for about 10 minutes and just said fuck it. Going to submit something more worthwhile next week.

96F5B6EB3D9BBC06BCE5EE0CD5BE81A5EB2F56BD

Fix the camera and it'll be gucci.
 

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Should I lower it and aim it a bit higher or?

Zoom in closer, get rid of all the empty space.

Try for this camera angle
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Mess with the angles until the blood is still visible. Try and fix the lighting so the blood doesn't look as cartoony.
 

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if you want advice on blood, it should be both sided, the end part will always have more blood coming out, but the entry needs impact blood, at the end, blood needs to be spread out


as for camera angle, a cinematic shot wouldnt hurt.
[doublepost=1502503757][/doublepost]oh and, lower the blood slightly at the end, the front should only be a slight splatter.

also, analyzing their stances, the watcher should be closer to ground, he should be using more of a shoulder approach, twist his right side to the left, speaking from model itself, not the poster right. his blade should be ever so slightly closer to himself, and the injured should look surprised by the stab, that means pull his spine back.

all i can give really, harder to do than say but it should make it more dramatic
 
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updated entry. (Don't know if I even submitted this yet or not)
 

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This counts as art now.

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933 damage lmao.


Also yes this is me playing.
 
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