Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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Corey

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"It's safer here."
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my dude, you need to add better lighting.
There's clearly a warm light above the body, yet the body is barely even touched with it. It makes sense if he was brighter, and would help with the focus a hell of a lot more. Also, you should consider the rule of thirds (picture-wise) in this, because he's not really in that area. It feels like the crate is what we should be focusing on. Little gripe here, too, but the DoF on the CPs is a bit too weak so all it does it just look blurred rather than in the distance, and the TV right next to the dead guy has no actual light projected around it. Just some static, simple white or bluish light would work but it just ain't here chief. Also make sure you get your angles in check, cos the horizon is pretty off there and it feels weird.

also if you're emphasising a dead guy in a corner, do a shot of the alleyway and have the dead guy land in a third of the picture at the side. trust me, it'll look nice.
 

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honestly no matter how cringy af a picture might look, all i can think of is that another person took the phys gun and tried doing a pic
and succeeded
somewhat


gmod posing will hopefully forever live

btw remember to join the discord and message occasionally to keep it alive lol
 
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honestly no matter how cringy af a picture might look, all i can think of is that another person took the phys gun and tried doing a pic
and succeeded
somewhat


gmod posing will hopefully forever live

btw remember to join the discord and message occasionally to keep it alive lol
link discord
 
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honestly no matter how cringy af a picture might look, all i can think of is that another person took the phys gun and tried doing a pic
and succeeded
somewhat


gmod posing will hopefully forever live

btw remember to join the discord and message occasionally to keep it alive lol

am i allowed to just look at the good as fuck art and not contribute
 

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honestly no matter how cringy af a picture might look, all i can think of is that another person took the phys gun and tried doing a pic
and succeeded
somewhat


gmod posing will hopefully forever live

btw remember to join the discord and message occasionally to keep it alive lol
hello what discord
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give appreciation to superman
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also is that the ready player one vr game cause i wanted to play it
 

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It's really good but it's reminding me of my friend who tells suicide jokes.
I also got the idea while working because I was self reflecting on my identity. It was originally going to say “identity crisis averted” but I think the mid life crisis was more fitting.
 
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