Unfortunately I've had work nonstop this week in particular so I was unable to finish this themed piece, I'm pumping out the low quality version for my entry
@Aleks, huge plus for the originality, it's a neat little idea. I also really like posing on most of the characters, they really look alive by it. However, the storyteller himself is a bit stiff, plus isn't really pointing the flashlight onto himself, but rather in the sky. His expression is also quite dull. You could pose him bending forward, with one of his hands holding the flashlight and the second just waving around, as his face shows how into the story he is. It's not bad though, even if it seems to be rushed.
@Kurumi Nya, I don't know which map you used, but I want it now. Send in the link fam.
@Heck, it's honestly just unfinished, so I'll leave it there as it is
@zigbomb, this one belongs to some SFM meme subreddit. Nice lighting and camera angle though. Also, where did you got these models from?
@RGB, it's not as bad as you say. Yeah, it might be unfinished, but what has been done is just stunning. Finish it up, and you've got yourself a sure win next round.
@Eddard Stark, @Anleas covered you a bit, but I'd also move the demon to the right, so it doesn't mix with the Doom Guy that's in the same colors. Add in more lighting from the lava pit as well. It's ok in any other aspect
Found the models on the workshop and stuffI'm quite tired today, been sleeping 5/6 hours a day for a week, so excuse me for being brief now
@Aleks, huge plus for the originality, it's a neat little idea. I also really like posing on most of the characters, they really look alive by it. However, the storyteller himself is a bit stiff, plus isn't really pointing the flashlight onto himself, but rather in the sky. His expression is also quite dull. You could pose him bending forward, with one of his hands holding the flashlight and the second just waving around, as his face shows how into the story he is. It's not bad though, even if it seems to be rushed.
@Kurumi Nya, I don't know which map you used, but I want it now. Send in the link fam.
Scenery, alongside with lighting looks pretty good here. All I have problem with here, is the boring camera angle, which looks more like something from a in-game dialogue screen in an RPG (really, just slap a box with few options of what to say and it'll be a perfect imitation of a game). Editing here is minimal, but cool either way. Honestly, if it weren't for the camera angle and unclear concept of what's going on, I'd definitely give it a pass on the winning this round.
@Heck, it's honestly just unfinished, so I'll leave it there as it is
@zigbomb, this one belongs to some SFM meme subreddit. Nice lighting and camera angle though. Also, where did you got these models from?
@RGB, it's not as bad as you say. Yeah, it might be unfinished, but what has been done is just stunning. Finish it up, and you've got yourself a sure win next round.
@Eddard Stark, @Anleas covered you a bit, but I'd also move the demon to the right, so it doesn't mix with the Doom Guy that's in the same colors. Add in more lighting from the lava pit as well. It's ok in any other aspect
So yeah, @247-0006-0001 'Jimbo' gets the big prize, I don't think I need to say why
Take a short vacation
And the second, honorary winner is @Club Ace. There's just something that I can't
name that makes it wallpaper worthy
@Kurumi Nya, I don't know which map you used, but I want it now. Send in the link fam.
Scenery, alongside with lighting looks pretty good here. All I have problem with here, is the boring camera angle, which looks more like something from a in-game dialogue screen in an RPG (really, just slap a box with few options of what to say and it'll be a perfect imitation of a game). Editing here is minimal, but cool either way. Honestly, if it weren't for the camera angle and unclear concept of what's going on, I'd definitely give it a pass on the winning this round.
So yeah, @247-0006-0001 'Jimbo' gets the big prize, I don't think I need to say why
Take a short vacation
