AOTW 8 of 52, 2021
Hmmm yes, very good - I especially like the angle and how its at a weird helmet angle as opposed to some FPS looking thing more to the left. It's jarring, but much more realistic-ee. Especially enjoy how there is just enough environment props to make a believable background. Nothing bad here, good stuff. I think ya should look into this kinda perspective stuff moreee
Hmmmmmmm, I do like how the silhouettes bring more focus on the main soldier. Gives the image more of an aim or target - kind of like a loading screen! Just needs some text that's like "Soldier perpetually angry and will kill you!" Idk I don't play Half Life. The scene build itself is brilliant and the posters added ontop of the screen is great :^) So yeah, think about adding text in feature or something and see if you can balance it out just right. For example I'd recommend just thing white text and keep it brief. It would look very modern
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M'chwa, perfect
Can't think of anything to add to this, maybe the most minute of details - like one or two teeny tiny rebels in the distant ruin sat by the windows or something I don't know. I think this is fab man. Looks like a real black and white ilford roll picture. Aaa
Damn you this is too dark, EXAGGERATE that darn lighting - there could be a really cool environment to go with the actions if it was actually more visible. Imagine if the man on the left with the weapon is entirely lit up with orange and looks incredibly evil, ready to shoot this guy in the back of the head. LIGHTS man LIGHTS.
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