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tried (and failed) to stylize it after this:
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A pose that I am gonna be using for my char bio, will be turned into a banner (got a few more WIP's when I can be bothered to edit.)

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A pose I made of mine and @Numbers character from Dee Pixel's Ante Diluvium
On the left is Numbers character, a Tissue Farmer who'se created a Synthetic Repeater that fires dark energy, along with merging a synthetic carapace with a metallic shell to create an exo-skeleton

On the right is my character 'Joe', a 70 year old Transhuman woh has been biologically frozen, meaning he doesn't age, who now lives his days Volking weapons and killing Combine Cultists.
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A pose I made of mine and @Numbers character from Dee Pixel's Ante Diluvium
On the left is Numbers character, a Tissue Farmer who'se created a Synthetic Repeater that fires dark energy, along with merging a synthetic carapace with a metallic shell to create an exo-skeleton

On the right is my character 'Joe', a 70 year old Transhuman woh has been biologically frozen, meaning he doesn't age, who now lives his days Volking weapons and killing Combine Cultists.
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cringe renjiro kobayashi copypaste
 
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A pose I made of mine and @Numbers character from Dee Pixel's Ante Diluvium
On the left is Numbers character, a Tissue Farmer who'se created a Synthetic Repeater that fires dark energy, along with merging a synthetic carapace with a metallic shell to create an exo-skeleton

On the right is my character 'Joe', a 70 year old Transhuman woh has been biologically frozen, meaning he doesn't age, who now lives his days Volking weapons and killing Combine Cultists.
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Me when I sell an exclusive military rifle of which I am the only the importer for 5% profits because everyone in this town is fucking dirt poor and I'm the only person with over 10 dollars.
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Nice work, I'd do a pose like this of what I've been up to on AD, if;
1. Everything I did wasn't visually boring management or selling.
2. I knew how to make a pose.

Take my neb kind stranger.

cringe renjiro kobayashi copypaste
If you think this is bad you should've seen his other character who got blasted. 1 to 1 Renjiro Kobayashi, this time with an assault rifle and reefer coat.
 
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A bunch of AI generated images
Bloody Cosmic
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The Fire Within Burns
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When I cry there isn't a sound
All my feelings cannot be held
I'm happy in my new strange world
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Cosmic Horror
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Darth Vader's burning agony
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Melancholy
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The Creation of the Universe
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The Moon in Silver Trees
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The Pain Within
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The Vibrant Universe
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Vibrant Death
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did you use artbreeder for these, or you used another program?
 

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AOTW 15 of 52, 2021

Sorry
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Welcome! People usually tend to submit things that are recent but I don't mind. This is a neato poster and if there wasn't such a diverse amount of colours I'd say it'd make a convincing advertisement that suits the aesthetic of the game it's based in. I especially like the details in the coat and how the shadows catch really well. If there's anything I think could'a been improved maybe the smoke at the end of the barrel is a little dark? May not of even been neccesary, but it's still a nice feature. Hope to see some more recent work of yours!

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Great scene, posing, lighting and details. Can't really add much to this. Perhaps if the tank had some more character or something? Seems like it did a lot of damage to the area before it was brought down and maybe giving it a personal touch would have been the cherry on top. Even if it was just like an emblem, or graffiti looking etching. Cool as always Viper.

This is cool! This is good! I think that maybe it's meaning or narrative got lost a little as it went from left to right. Like: Hardcore firefight fuck yes! Guns! Yes!. Then things really chill out to the right with guys just stood around and on their phone etc etc. But if you take the narrative out, it's actually really well posed and positioned. I'd suggest just sitting down and taking breaks sometimes in work and thinking on what it is you want to show in the build. Great work here man.

Heyeeee this is a cool improvement. There's definitely more depth here compared to the previous image. Gonna find something else to complain about though: which is the strange pink tinge above. Feel like it's just kind of a weird section of the image and doesn't fit much - and then to really nit pic; the eyes man, their eyes... especially the one on the right is just kinda strange looking. Also, I don't know if it's intentional but the mask / texture put over the top on the sides is missing on the right side. Summary: Try and filter out unnecessary colors, improvement to eyes perhaps, otherwise the posing and lighting this time is very good!

Art is a continual learning process so I don't think you've failed anything here. You've flipped your own style on something which is great! For some feedback though; firstly the image would benefit from selecting a color theme. Like on a black background it's weird to have like a dominating white focus with just a total mix of colours either side imo. Personally I think that it would be cooler if it was all a mix of colours instead of all black and white. Second, the buildings would look a lot better if it was made a little smaller so it sits inbetween the ears more comfortably maybe? Keep toying with it, it's cool!

These images you've given us are the perfect example of how an angle is a huge difference to showing a scene or showing a character. It is hard to find that balance right. This image above is the first type: shows a whole area pretty well. Could maybe do with some lighting improvements but otherwise kinda standard: has details of a market and this guy looking around.

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CHAD character angle. Which almost has that balance of scene and character I was talking about. Only problems here is that bandage in the way and maybe an extra character in the background talking to the group of people. The vignette and the shade on the character is super cool! I'd use this pic for the bio bro but if you have the file take that bandage out the way or move it a little to the right! Cool cool cool



I'm not gonna pretend for a second I know anything about musical production, because I really don't. But I'm still gonna be a dick and give my honest opinion and maybe some advice for any future songs you make: Shit is tight dog, hits a sombre note and I like it but I just wish I could hear more of the lyrics cus yous murmuring boy. Some general advise: should get on Audacity and work on recording the song first with the instrument and then add another audio track over the top of the lyrics. This way you just need to record one solid take with the instrument, then take however many attempts to sing over the top! Just an idea, maybe you already did that really well and I just couldn't tell. Hope to hear more bru.

Character poses are pretty cool and so are the models. The rest of the image definitely needs some work though. Like maybe some creative lighting and some props in the background to flesh out the scene a bit more. Like wherever they area, what the location is used for, etc.
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highlighting @nexus 's drunk outcomes


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I made a thing based on IC events from another server. Pretty much my first go at doing anything of the sort but I figured I'd drop it here.

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Kinda want to make more but I don't really have time so this will likely be it for a good while.
 
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everything you make is super fucking beautiful man, keep it up
the only thing i'd critique are the facial expressions of the fellas in the background
thank you! and yes I agree, my faceposer game isn't exactly that great. I still need to work on that.
 
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I made a thing based on IC events from another server. Pretty much my first go at doing anything of the sort but I figured I'd drop it here.

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Kinda want to make more but I don't really have time so this will likely be it for a good while.
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