Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

[liew]

 

[Heck]

I know I'm in no spot to be criticising work but I'd like to point out a few things about these two men:

The conscript is holding his gun like he's expecting to fire, stock on his shoulder.
But in the context of the male next to him he doesn't seem right.
They look like they're having a chill conversation if you base the context on the older-man

Spoiler: You've triggered a gun-nut

You. Never. Leave. Your. Firing. Hand. Holding. The. Gun. Without. Support. From. The. Fore-grip. Hand.
If you want to use a hand you use your firing hand so it doesn't get fatigued.

 

[liew]

I know I'm in no spot to be criticising work but I'd like to point out a few things about these two men:

The conscript is holding his gun like he's expecting to fire, stock on his shoulder.
But in the context of the male next to him he doesn't seem right.
They look like they're having a chill conversation if you base the context on the older-man

Spoiler: You've triggered a gun-nut

You. Never. Leave. Your. Firing. Hand. Holding. The. Gun. Without. Support. From. The. Fore-grip. Hand.
If you want to use a hand you use your firing hand so it doesn't get fatigued.

How's this for you.

E: Tbh, this is the final image I'm going to pick. I feel it has a much stronger and better camera angle even though it does cut out a lot of the work I did:

 

[Heck]

How's this for you.

Much better, thanks for taking into consideration what I said :)

 

[Ond]

How's this for you.

E: Tbh, this is the final image I'm going to pick. I feel it has a much stronger and better camera angle even though it does cut out a lot of the work I did:

Lighting is a bit off

I'd have put a soft darker white light from the top and put down some street lamps with some soft orange light to add diversity

also you can use skyboxes in the back to fill out empty space

 

[All Adm*ns are Bastards]

 

[Rabid]

lmao brilliant

 

[Erkor]

I know I'm in no spot to be criticising work but I'd like to point out a few things about these two men:

The conscript is holding his gun like he's expecting to fire, stock on his shoulder.
But in the context of the male next to him he doesn't seem right.
They look like they're having a chill conversation if you base the context on the older-man

Spoiler: You've triggered a gun-nut

You. Never. Leave. Your. Firing. Hand. Holding. The. Gun. Without. Support. From. The. Fore-grip. Hand.
If you want to use a hand you use your firing hand so it doesn't get fatigued.

everyone has the right to criticize work if they know what they're talking about

even if it's shit like "the lighting looks kind of weird and flat" or "the pose doesn't make sense"

 

[Jer]

experimenting, definitely not good but still not unworth it to post here lol

 

[All Adm*ns are Bastards]

 

[liew]

From the advice I was given, I've updated the pose.

 

[Cookie_]

 

[liew]

reminds me of the division

 

[Cookie_]

reminds me of the division

you mean absolute shit? Same

 

[steambored]

you mean absolute shit? Same

it isnt THAT bad

 

[Heck]

it isnt THAT bad

the game or the art?
If you're talking about the art you nEED GLASSES because IT'S AMAZING REEEEEEEE
If you're talking about the game I'm guessing you have good eyesight :grinning:

 

[steambored]

the game or the art?
If you're talking about the art you nEED GLASSES because IT'S AMAZING REEEEEEEE
If you're talking about the game I'm guessing you have good eyesight :grinning:

talkign about both.

artwise its fantastic.
game-wise its an ok game, could have been better handled.

 

[Bandit]

if this doesnt win i will eat a fireaxe

 

[Erkor]

 

[Dicknose]

god I wish I was creative like this