Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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me? winning art of the week?

nashi: makes art that's epic as fuck
judges: gives win
nashi:

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this seems a tad too poetic for my small brain 0iq understanding. Although I like the picture quite a lot, I got no idea what is going on aside from a dead cp on a piano amongst some gravestones in a manky looking graveyard. You gotta add some more context to poses like these my guy, more dead bodies? Some rebels? Some something, just more than what's there now.

i guess i'll clear it up
he's not supposed to be dead, rather enraged, notice the fist on the keys and him grasping at the top
the gravestones are supposed to be his brothers-in-arms
 
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This is a really nice little scenebuild you've made here, with some really accurate and realistic looking poses/stances from each of the characters. I haven't got any big tips for you, but just some things you should consider if you hadn't picked up on it.
  • Shadow Attenuation - shadows are really dark and are more of an obstruction to the picture than an environmental input imo, maybe use a light with no shadow enabled that's been dimmed down quite a bit, at least so some more of the scene can be enjoyed.
  • Tiny Details - when it comes to scenebuilds, the smallest details can be what bring it forward, even though it can take a dumb amount of time it's usually worth it, just watch out for any model clipping and keep things in touch with reality, for example - the dead mans hands are going through the floor, or if it's supposed to look like there's blood in his hands idk, just not quite right. And smoke doesn't go into small particles, is still a nice effect but ukno, nit picky cus it's actually good.
Do another gang pose like this bro. Good work.

Thanks for the criticism, I like it.

1. Yes, the hands clipping through the blood, it shouldnt do that but after an hour of rendering I wasn't feeling like fixing that.
2. No, I will not make a light poster, no. Never make those
 
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got bored and decided to make a picture of a black man enjoying his food
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also a lighter version
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got bored and decided to make a picture of a black man enjoying his food
up4utAC.jpg
also a lighter version
HCgWrMD.jpg

second looks nicer but the blood has a brightness different to the rest and it looks a bit strange.

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"I am a Minister... killing people.."

"We all do that, in a way.."

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i have something for dark posters, poses etc, the lighting and the darkness just looks fantastic imo, gl on the competition!

Same dude, I rarely make light poses, which upsets me a little because I miss out on a lot of opporunities but I have this thing for dark atmospheric shit
 
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Same dude, I rarely make light poses, which upsets me a little because I miss out on a lot of opporunities but I have this thing for dark atmospheric shit

yeah, i do really like them, please make some more
 
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You should think of these things while creating as well, you can make some cool stuff my friend bc I've seen it all before, work on a biGGER something :grinning:. No win this time though.
soon i think
 
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