Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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ok changed to the updated one.......
 

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not that good but w/e

Real good now. Looks calmer.

Anyway, here's my entry:
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Current "Unfixable" Problems with the pose:
Cinder's Cape is see-through.
The flames behind Dark Souls man are un-glowed.
Some fire looks green, result from green screen.
Cinder isn't actually looking at the character, it just looks like he is due to camera angle. (Lucky save)
Originally, Cinder was way taller to show power.
Cinder's arm is actually 100% fucked in the SFM session, his elbow is at 180 degrees to get that stabbing angle, his body blocks his upper arm, though.



See below for design process

mfw I lose track of time.
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Current "Unfixable" Problems with the pose:
The 'unfixability' of something doesn't really excuse anyone

Tbh, way back when I wanted to make a scene where a cop was shooting, I couldn't find a good effect in sfm to make it look good (PD2 particles are fine, found them lately). That being said, the 'unfixable' got fixed by fiddling with light

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Nothing was edited outside of SFM, as back when I did it I had known shit about editing and paint.net that I now use for colour correction, brightness, contrast and all that

Even if it's a medicore example, remember that lights are very powerful tools, so use them in a creative way
 

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The 'unfixability' of something doesn't really excuse anyone

Tbh, way back when I wanted to make a scene where a cop was shooting, I couldn't find a good effect in sfm to make it look good (PD2 particles are fine, found them lately). That being said, the 'unfixable' got fixed by fiddling with light

270f49e8bd4e8cf7ca24798f68f3cb94.png


Nothing was edited outside of SFM, as back when I did it I had known shit about paint.net that I now use for colour correction, brightness, contrast and all that

Even if it's a medicore example, remember that lights are very powerful tools, so use them in a creative way

Funny thing is... I fixed all the problems in my new post.
 
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Mine for the week. Was thinking of doing a large scene in GMOD, got half way and felt unmotivated so I did this one.

Actually a pretty good pose. Just a shame that wall is so low texture. And maybe his left shoulder looks a bit broken.

Beyond that, good finger posing, face posing and everything else. Maybe add more than one light next time, though.

G'luck on your other pieces!
 
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