meh
@Maxim, it's... Uninteresting. While I really like poses that show some fight, this one just doesn't shine with anything new, nor with and bigger tensity or movement. That's probably because of three reasons:
#1, you've used standard animations for most of your ragdolls, and the remaining few are basically bit edited standard sequences
#2, the camera angle is
boring. Ever saw a military movie? Just look up
Saving Private Ryan for example, you'll get what I'm saying, or just look up on any of my previous reviews of action poses, as I honestly keep repeating myself each round
#3, the scenery is closed, and what I mean by that, is that it looks as if nothing would exist after these borders, no prop, or character is on it's edge. An easy fix, would be placing few dead bodies on them, or simply zooming in, or even cutting it, like
here (of course, you'd also need to add more stuff near those cops and etc).
It also lacks of content near those cops, plus they don't really seem like they need to protect that gate, as it looks sturdy af. Either way, not a bad try,
@Scone !, is that an armless, edgy CP on right, and a waifu in the middle with a dick book?
@b00ty_Senpai, honestly, it's a
worthy piece. I like it's concept, with that grenade as a last try to kill evil combines, it's just the details that mess it up a bit. First off, the most important one, his face - it looks more as if he'd be on crack, with his eyes wide open, looking at that nade as a snack. Not real facial expressions that'd indicate his pain, but also maybe some happyness of him having an actual chance to still win. Another one is that it could easily be zoomed in way more, and it'd look way better, without as much space wasted, like
here, or even maybe moved it a little bit to the right, and rotated to the left, so that it'd be facing the soldier from more of a side perspective. Last one is the general low quality model and blood decal, but overall, you're getting there fam, you really are. You used rule of thirds, as well as gave it a really good concept. Mang, I'm proud of you,
@Eddard Stark, I try to not judge screenshots, unless they're actually edited nicely, or are stunning by themself. It's a nice shot, but not much of
your work has been put into it, so ye
@moonman, żeby ze szwabem grać...
Seriously, it's been fun to watch. It's more of a meme than a submission, but it was good. Send me the server IPs over the Steam fam
No win for today, too many people to choose from
