Completed [Competition] Art of The Week

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going to photoshop this
[doublepost=1526325686][/doublepost]feedback is also welcomed
 
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I like it. However I get this 2d aspect. It might just be me but I'd love to see more you know? Like what he is looking at and why did that firw start? Also some lighting where the fire is would add more depth if put in right. You are doing good, keep it up!

edit: look up phongboost for sfm tutorial and you can make the guy look wet due to the rain
 

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very wide stance, in the movies luke is always exclusively seen with very rugged, tight and tall movements save for the backflip onto the barge in Episode VI. he towers upwards, and holds the lightsaber high as if he was in a combat defensive stance - looks better than what you went for imo - just looks unnatural with the particularly large spacing of his legs
 

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very wide stance, in the movies luke is always exclusively seen with very rugged, tight and tall movements save for the backflip onto the barge in Episode VI. he towers upwards, and holds the lightsaber high as if he was in a combat defensive stance - looks better than what you went for imo - just looks unnatural with the particularly large spacing of his legs
I like it. However I get this 2d aspect. It might just be me but I'd love to see more you know? Like what he is looking at and why did that firw start? Also some lighting where the fire is would add more depth if put in right. You are doing good, keep it up!

edit: look up phongboost for sfm tutorial and you can make the guy look wet due to the rain
Okay will do both
 

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should I try and photoshop sparks onto the stunstick? also I think the lighting behind the cp in front is crap
grab a lamp of any colour n slap it behind the cop on the right, preferably hiding it by the cp on the left

would make for some pretty good rim lighting
 

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Where were these taken?
The one in the post is the Ghirardelli Square in San Francisco.
#1-4 are at the Monterey Bay Aquarium.
#5-11 are in Morro Bay, California
#12 Arizona, somewhere in a desert, I forgot
#13-14 Monterey, California
#15-20 My home town
#21-22 Colorado
#23 Monterey
 
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