In Progress [Competition] Art of The Week

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  1. Dicknose

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    going to photoshop this
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    feedback is also welcomed
     
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  2. Dicknose

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    Any feedback?
     
  3. CloudBucket

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    I like it. However I get this 2d aspect. It might just be me but I'd love to see more you know? Like what he is looking at and why did that firw start? Also some lighting where the fire is would add more depth if put in right. You are doing good, keep it up!

    edit: look up phongboost for sfm tutorial and you can make the guy look wet due to the rain
     
  4. ramsgater

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    very wide stance, in the movies luke is always exclusively seen with very rugged, tight and tall movements save for the backflip onto the barge in Episode VI. he towers upwards, and holds the lightsaber high as if he was in a combat defensive stance - looks better than what you went for imo - just looks unnatural with the particularly large spacing of his legs
     
  5. Dicknose

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    Okay will do both
     
  6. Dicknose

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    Updated fellas
     
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  8. Dicknose

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    Holy guacamole. If you could teach me how to do this shit, I'd be greatful
     
  9. Sixx

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    vectors are the coolest shit on god's green earth
     
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  10. A Person

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    should I try and photoshop sparks onto the stunstick? also I think the lighting behind the cp in front is crap
     
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  11. liew

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    grab a lamp of any colour n slap it behind the cop on the right, preferably hiding it by the cp on the left

    would make for some pretty good rim lighting
     
  12. Lukemia

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    The green light source needs to be changed to the other side of lukes face, The source is on the opposite side of where lukes lightsaber actually is
     
  13. Dicknose

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    Good shit, missed that
     
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  14. Zombine

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    realized photography is acceptable here.
    have an entry.

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    I wasn't sure which to pick, but I've taken quite a few recently.
    here's a small selection of my recent photos.
     
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    That gallery is fucking glorious dude.
     
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    updated my entry, added a rimlight on the front cp and lit up the back cp
     
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  17. Dicknose

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    Where were these taken?
     
  18. Zombine

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    The one in the post is the Ghirardelli Square in San Francisco.
    #1-4 are at the Monterey Bay Aquarium.
    #5-11 are in Morro Bay, California
    #12 Arizona, somewhere in a desert, I forgot
    #13-14 Monterey, California
    #15-20 My home town
    #21-22 Colorado
    #23 Monterey
     
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  19. FieldersNL

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    Started using advanced lighting and SDOF and I'm starting to get the hang of it
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    Here's a 2560x1080
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  20. Vasey105

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    top one is way better, much better framing
     
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